Whoops, timing mistake at 3:25, will fix that for the v2.

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Thanks! A bunch of food-for-thought suggestions today; sorry. 03:25: when you do adjust the timing, consider also splitting or `{\an8}`ing the line to avoid obscuring the book (although it’s still visible briefly a few lines later) 10:06: sk → ks 10:32: consider singular “Girl” (imo you’ve been making Sara’s lines sound like she’s believed to be a single girl, although upon rereading, it seems you have her say “_that_ girl”, hmm. I’ve been reading it as “the girl from the rumours”, but I guess that’s only one possible interpretation) 13:24: consider “we” 15:46: just in case, I think this is 傀儡 16:55: consider “[revived/awoken/back in action] thanks to her power” (you have “revived” at 05:49 fwiw) Also consider adding a few commas (spotted while looking around the ASS): 20:39: before “I guess” 21:32: after “yeah” Finally, FYI I’ve posted yet another suggestion back on episode 5 that I spotted earlier this week; sorry! Of course, if you’ve already seen it and disagreed, that’s entirely fine.

Thanks as always! Food-for-thought suggestions are just as welcome. I'll take a look at the ep5 comments again too!